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Reagan Troy's avatar

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

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I enjoyed this a lot, John. I felt myself lingering in that contrast between something that had to end -- seemingly by an outer force -- and that feeling of freedom at the beginning of something new. The feeling of grief over a loss, softly intertwined with the liberating force of what newly awaits. Your poetry is very powerful and it's wonderful that I get to read it.

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